Archawn's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Color Balls]

Fun

Well, the graphics were bad, and I think the balls were a bit too slow. It was a nice concept. You should make a new version with better graphics and stuff.

mrty responds:

I AM thinking of a new and better version, maybe after I'm done with Sniper's Contracts 2.

Thanks for playing, and reviewing.

[Flash Basics: Animation]

I made the last vote!

A very basic yet thorough tutorial. Nice work. But, the transitions were a little too slow.

[Windows XP Dillon Edition]

I can tell you put some time into this, but...

...to be honest it was horrible. First of all, if you're going to make a windows spoof at least have something original in it. This has all been done before. Also, if you're NOT going to have something original at least copy the other stuff WELL. This was a very low quality piece of work. Finally, you need to put MORE time into it, and get your dimensions right! There are little white bars around the flash.

[ZIAG1 - The Simplest Game]

14,445! Whew! I'm number one!

I'm exhausted. And here's why you get a two.

+ 2 for using up an hour of my time

- Too laggy if you click really fast
- No point
- Boring
- Extremely laggy (this is different from "too laggy". Yeah, it is.)

[Frame Button Tutorial]

It looks nice, but it's not efficient.

Your way is way too complicated (relatively, of course). There are much better ways to perform the same task. Anyway, it looked a lot nicer than some of the other tutorials I've seen.

And by the way, next time you make a tutorial, make it something new. Do you know how many button tutorials there are out there? Don't make stuff just to have another submission and good score. Make stuff to share your knowledge with other people. Make stuff for fun, not scores.

Elroy responds:

I had a lot of fun making this. The nice score is just a bonus in my view. I expected to get like, a much lower score.

[Don't Click Green Game]

Number 10 is too hard!

And this game is way too fun.

[Bloons Tower Defense 3]

AWESOME!

This game is so addictive. Great work, because I've been playing for the past two hours! Very easy at the beginning, but man, the addition of the M.O.A.B thing or whatever it's called makes it really hard.

[Mastermind: World Conqueror]

I'm sorry, but I hate it.

I can tell you put ALOT of effort into this, but that's not what I'm basing my review on. This game is VERY boring. It is also too complicated, and the controls don't "feel right". This is just not like you!

[Two Point Perspective Tut]

Good Job

Very well written, and easy-to-follow. I really like the notebook paper as the Background... I just think it looks very cool. Awesome! 8/10