Archawn's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Run To The Other Side]

Well..

It was a gripping movie, I'll tell you that. I really wanted to know what was at the end. I was mildly disappointed, though, when it was just trees.

To critique your running loop, I think the woman (?) 's legs stretched out a few degrees too far. It looked like she was jumping, rather than running.

All in all, it was a good flash movie. Still needs some work though.

CyborgCactus responds:

i figured she ran enough. and i figured it would be a good way to stop the movie if she was obstructed by a forest. after all, it was just a project i did for school to show a run cycle. thanks for your critique!

[Hunting Bears]

Beautiful...

Poor little bear....

[T E T R I S ' D]

It's the 25th Anniversary of Tetris Today...

Did you plan that or something?

Great submission, a unique idea.

KobraEditing responds:

Someone else told me that and nope, didn't plan it. That is so incredibly unlikely.

[Nameless 6 Vol.3 Part 1/2]

Lol

I've been waiting for this for a LONG time. This was no disappointment!

[I am Alone]

Awesome.

Well, the piano part was a bit misleading... It didn't seem like it was going to be like a war-type movie at the beginning. The man also looked... strange...

To end on a good note, I'd like to say your story and style fit the song pretty well. A very refreshing survival movie. Good animation, and overall, this deserves an 8/10, 4/5.

Nice work!

[About Video Game Previews]

Uh, NO.

I couldn't understand what the hell he was saying... Learn to voice act, dude.

For the most part, this was just a tweened mouth paired with bad audio.

0/10.

[The Dream Collab]

Awesome!!

I really love this. It's just awesome, all the random thoughts of society put into one flash.

What song did Vago187 use? (The second part)

LenardNotLenny responds:

thanks!

[Runescape Funny #1]

No.

Seriously: This isn't an animation. It's a still image with two black circles that change by around 10 pixels in height every few frames. And the audio wasn't even that funny.

Luckily for you I won't even bother reviewing, or even watching "Runescape Funny #2". These should be called, "My Suckish Runescape Parody" #1 and #2. I'm sure you thought of that, but it's over 25 characters.

[On The Moon (episode 15)]

Lol

I'm going to call the counsel on you!

I work for them, you know!

I love these.

[Cat Face ep.10]

Ah, Silly Catface!

So funny. MAKE MORE. You should release a DVD of this or something.